Hi Adrian you have a lovely touch and this piece is very fresh.
Here is food for thought did you ever consider adding a pop of
color in one area of the piece?
I really don't find much to criticise here, i honestly like it a
lot1
The only thing, and only perhaps, is that personally i would not
let the big dark shadow on the right side start directly from the
corner. But only perhaps :-)
And I would put it anyway for sale on FAA
Adrian i think you have done a super job with this.
I agree with what Lisa said regarding a spot of colour some where
in the painting.
miki i think the same as you with this black coming from the
corner.
But its just a personal thing.
Adrain you have done a super job and i think also it should be in
the FAA Galllery.
Lucia :)
I forgot this was still on here, the black cloud at the top left
came about because of some spilt coffee :/
Thanks for all the hints and tips.. will have another go when i get
time.
And he says he is not an Artist!!!! Pffft! Adrian this is such an
awesome picture!
I would like to offer a little advice to you. If you look for a
painting on line by Michaelangelo called Daniel. (Sistine Chapel)
You will get a good idea as to how to add color to a painting like
this. I came across something similar last night in the new art I
think where someone executed this perfectly. I will find the artist
name and post it for you...but it's time to do your homework :0)
Not an artist indeed!!
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The only thing, and only perhaps, is that personally i would not let the big dark shadow on the right side start directly from the corner. But only perhaps :-)
And I would put it anyway for sale on FAA
I agree with what Lisa said regarding a spot of colour some where in the painting.
miki i think the same as you with this black coming from the corner.
But its just a personal thing.
Adrain you have done a super job and i think also it should be in the FAA Galllery.
Lucia :)
Thanks for all the hints and tips.. will have another go when i get time.
I would like to offer a little advice to you. If you look for a painting on line by Michaelangelo called Daniel. (Sistine Chapel) You will get a good idea as to how to add color to a painting like this. I came across something similar last night in the new art I think where someone executed this perfectly. I will find the artist name and post it for you...but it's time to do your homework :0) Not an artist indeed!!
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